Peer-Critique
PEER CRITIQUE
1. Who were the sources?
Her grandmother, her aunt, and her mom.
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
Her story is about her grandmas journey from walking on feet from Mexico to the US. Her grandma had to strive on her own and make money to provide for her family.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
32 Paragraphs.
4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)?
871 words.
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
16 direct quotes.
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
3 different people are quoted in her story.
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
“I do not regret coming into the U.S. because it gave me a chance to watch my kids grow into the adults they are now and now i’m getting to watch my grandchildren do the same,
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
Towards the end.
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes it does capture the readers attention.
10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
Maybe Katies siblings.
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
All the non-direr quotes are facts.
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
No I understand her story topic.
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
Life moving countries on your own.
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
I think this story is very impactful and has a strong message.
15. Give them a peer grade from 0-100
97.
1. Who were the sources?
Her grandmother, her aunt, and her mom.
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
Her story is about her grandmas journey from walking on feet from Mexico to the US. Her grandma had to strive on her own and make money to provide for her family.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
32 Paragraphs.
4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)?
871 words.
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
16 direct quotes.
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
3 different people are quoted in her story.
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
“I do not regret coming into the U.S. because it gave me a chance to watch my kids grow into the adults they are now and now i’m getting to watch my grandchildren do the same,
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
Towards the end.
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes it does capture the readers attention.
10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
Maybe Katies siblings.
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
All the non-direr quotes are facts.
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
No I understand her story topic.
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
Life moving countries on your own.
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
I think this story is very impactful and has a strong message.
15. Give them a peer grade from 0-100
97.
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