The Dispatch-News Evaluation

AISD and may bring major benefits:
1.
Who: AISD school board and James Bowie High School
What: A bond worth over $1 million that helps improve and renovate the school campus. Bowie is estimated to use $91,030,000
When: Couple years
Where: James Bowie High School
Why: Bowie is 30 years old and had very little remodel since it opened in 1988, air conditioning has become broken and along with many other important necessities for a good learning environment.
How: Renovating and adding capacity and capability in the fine arts hallway, additions to the athletics facility, 2 story parking lot, and improvements to hallways and classes.

2. James Bowie High school hasn't been renovated since the doors opened in 1988, the air conditioning and plumbing stopped working and the staff and AISD team has decided that it is now a mission to renovate the school that is 11th on the list of most work needed. The AISD bond has granted $1 million in austin area schools, about $91,030,000 will be dedicated to Bowie. The master plan for the James Bowie High school is to : Renovate and add capacity and capability in the fine arts hallway, additions to the athletics facility,  a two story parking lot, and improvements to hallways and classes. In the years down the line Bowie will be the dream school with the best necessities for the environments of the students at the school.

3. 
  • Principal, Mark Robinson- Direct Quote
  • AISD superintendent, Dr. Paul Cruz-Direct Quote
  • Editor, Madison Austin- Indirect Quote
  • AISD consultant and Bowie alumni-Direct Quote
  • Senior Brian an Garcia-Direct Quote
4. No opinions, factual story with opinions that are directly quoted.

5. Yes it allows the readers to know that the news article will be about the AISD Bond and how beneficial it can be to the Bowie Campus.

6. Yes.

New principal makes individuals and their needs a priority:
1.
Who: New Principal, Mark Robinson
What: Working to create long term plans, relationships with the students, and ensure students are happy at Bowie.
When: During the school year 2017-2018
Where: James Bowie High School
Why: To improve the mental health of Bowie students.
How: Educational and social advancement, communication, pushing the bonds, and ensure happiness among all at Bowie.

2. The new school year has began with a new principal, Bowie has noticed positive shifts and advancements that help all Bowie students feel welcomed and happy to be a student at Bowie High school. The new principal in the 2017-2018 school year has implemented new things that the Bowie community has never seen before such as the daily announcements, the close connection to all students, assuring chrome books to all students, and lowering school stress. He hopes to improve the mental health of Bowie students and decreasing anxiety when it comes to school.

3.

  •  Principal, Mark Robinson- Direct Quote
  • Victoria Newell- Indirect Quote
  • Assistant principal Carla De La Rosa-Direct Quote
4. No, very factual and if there are opinions it's in quotes.

5.Yes the readers will know from reading the headline that it will be about the principal and his priorities in our school.

6. Yes

Technology due to arrive in January:
1.
Who: All Bowie students
What: Receive technology to allow all students to have exposure to technology at ease.
When: January 2018
Where: James Bowie High School
Why: To allow all students to have access to technology regardless of income.
How: The work form AISD and our school staff to implement technology easily into all students life.

2. This January, AISD and our school staff has worked to get all students their own chrome book to allow all students to use technology to help them with their school work and provide students without laptops technology that can help them. This a new idea that is implemented into Bowie but everyone hopes that the technology will aid students and allow them to have a hassle free online school experience.

3.

  • Junior, Noelle Parker - Direct Quote
  • Madisen Johnson- Indirect Quote 
  • Allie Grooms-Direct Quote
  • Micheal Evans-Direct Quote
4. No opinions , all opinions are in quotes.

5. Yes allows readers to know that the story will be about the technology that is arriving in January at James Bowie High School.

6.Yes

New Bulldog logo soon to be created due to trademark issues:
1.
Who: The Bowie bulldawg
What: risk of being sued for having similar logo, trademark issues.
When: This year
Where: Bowie high school
Why: Similar logo causing controversy
How: Risk of being sued.

2. The Bowie community this year was informed by Gonzaga university that the logo being utilized at James Bowie High school is also being used at Gonzaga university, if we don't stop using the logo the risk of being sued will be processed. The Bowie community has stared changing the logo, but it will be the hardest for the athletic department because the have to change all their uniforms and equipment.

3.

  • Football coach, Ty Brandon-Direct Quote
  • Sophomore, Ibrahim Abdulijabbar- Direct Quote
  • Mia Barbosa- Indirect Quote
  • Sophomore Alex Paulson- Direct Quote
  • Mark Robinson, Direct Quote
4. No everything is a fact.

5. Yes it does.

6. Yes

See teachers students life skills:
1.
Who: Students
What: Learn life skills from SEL
When: In class
Where: Bowie high school
Why: The lessons include every day, fundamental life skills.
How: Teaching and learning.

2. The SEL teaches the Bowie students life skills because it covers everyday fundamentals that would help one to succeed in the real world around them. Learning about treating others and other important  topics have helped many students in class learn how to act and feel in public, also teaches life skills like maintaining relationships and overcoming challenges.

3.

  • Sydney Johnson- Direct Quote
  • Mo Orr- Indirect Quote
  • Frazier Social Environment learning- Direct Quote
  • Natalia Casanova- Direct Quote

4. No everything is factual.

5. Yes it does.

6. No pictures in the article.


Robinson's first year focuses on arranging students' needs to cone first:
1.
Who: Mark Robinson
What: Focuses on arranging students need to come first
When: In school, Robinsons first year
Where: Bowie high school
Why: Build connection with the students and helping them in school.
How: Communication and comfort

2.  As Robinson first year at James Bowie High school he has assured comfort and communicated with us to allow us to feel welcome to Bowie. He is focused on arranging students need and allowing to reduce stress and anxiety about coming to school.

3.

  •  Kelly Flickinger- Direct Quote
  • Emily Robinette- Direct Quote
  • Mark Robinson- Direct Quote
  • Jimmy Counihan-Direct Quote
4. Yes, when the narrator said "so far, they have been a big a success in the eyes of students". A opinion because it expresses the way he/she thinks students feels.

5. Yes it does.

6. N/A

Administration revises the incentive plan:
1.
Who: Bowie Students
What: Incentive Plam
When: The new school year
Where: Bowie high school
Why: To ease the stress for finals. Motivate students to come to school everyday.
How: Coming to school everyday will grant you a certificate that can be used during the week of the finals.

2. The new school year has began and the incentive plan has been implemented in play. The students who come to school everyday will receive two certificates that can be used to relieve stress during the week of the finals.

3.

  • Kiran Patel-Indirect quote
  • Shikha Patel-Direct Quote
  • Ruth Ann Widner- Direct Quote
  • Emily Leeke- Direct Quote
  • Emily Robinette-Direct Quote
4. No very factual.

5. Yes it does.

6. Yes


Bowie Organizations soar to new heights with drones on campus:
1.
Who: Bowie Organizations
What: Drone on campus
When: The new school year
Where: Bowie high school
Why: Drone Photography is a good experience and fun.
How: During games or events, they fly the drone and take cool shots.

2. The new school year had began with new drones, these drones are fun and very fitting as they are very popular. The drones implemented this year by the Bowie organization help take good shots for the photography students, even ROTC has began to create a team on drones.

3.

  • Channel Debrzenski-Direct Quote
  • Andrew Nourse- Indirect Quote
  • Peter Dang- Indirect Quote
  • Nick Mocygeba- Direct Quote
  • Lake Leifker- Direct Quote
4. No all are factual.

5. Yes it does.

6. Yes it does.





















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