C.E. #6.2
SHORT ANSWER 1. The San Isidro border inspection facility can hold about 300 people 2. He felt increasingly sidelined by his boss He wanted to spend more time with his family He felt frustrated by lawmakers as well 3. An ethically murky but legal practice by candidates who fill political clubs with their supporters to win endorsements. 4. The business with the greatest economic impact is wasfeltbybarsandrestaruants with $56 million 5. An estimated $250 million. 5a. I have not seen it, but I would like to see it. LONG ANSWER 1. A public school in Campo, Colo., hasn't required students to attend school on Fridays. They decided to drop a weekday to boost attendance and better attract teachers to the towns school. This schedule is becoming more common elsewhere as school leaders search for both ways to attract teachers and save money. Many school districts say this change saves money and makes it easier to recruit teachers. The changes aren't universally popular
I liked your transition words and you had good describing words as well. Good job I really liked it!
ReplyDeleteYou supported your opinion very well with facts and quotes. You didn't sugarcoat anything, which was great. You are missing commas in a few places, but did a good job overall.
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